Your friend invited you to his/her party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you cannot come • give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner • suggest another time to meet Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ____________,

#friend #party #reason #time #addresses #____________

Dear Amisha I was delighted to receive an invitation to your birthday

party

. Just a quick note to let you know that I won’t be able to make it to the

party

. I couldn't make it to the

party

because I had a meeting scheduled for 2PM which was

initially

after the

party

,but unfortunately

due to

some

reason

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they pushed the timings to 9 AM which means I have to leave a day earlier to attend the conference. The reason to let you know on

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short notice is that my meeting was going to be cancelled but they had scheduled it anyhow. On top of that, they gave us a few days to prepare for the meeting which made me so busy and I totally forgot to write to you and I am sorry for

this

. Despite

this

change, I have something special for you if we could meet in the early week of November, maybe, on the weekends. Please let me know your availability. Looking forward to seeing you. Lots of Love, Saniya

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Consider using more precise dates when suggesting another meeting time, to make your plans seem more concrete and thoughtful.

coherence cohesion

Your letter is well-structured, with each paragraph dedicated to a different aspect of the prompt, which makes it easy to follow.

task achievement

The sincere tone and clear explanations provided for your absence and late notification are excellent.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

176 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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