You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: where you went what you saw there how you felt about it
Dear Jass,
I hope you are doing well. I'm writing
this
letter to tell you that recently I visited a museum which is very popular in our area.
I went to Toronto Downtown this
weekend as it is a famous tourist place
where I saw the museum that is
worth seeing. I went there with my family last
Sunday to see that historic place
. It is a great place
where I see the ancient sculptures and paintings which are very fascinating. I also
saw various pictures of freedom fighters in Canada which provides knowledge of the history.
I felt great when I visited the place
as it provided me with deep knowledge and helped with immense information that is
good for exposure. It is recommended that you visit this
place
as it is worth seeing.
Best Regards,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of your experience for maximum impact.
task achievement
Consider expanding on how the exhibits made you feel or any particularly memorable moments for a more detailed response.
coherence cohesion
You've done a great job of structuring your letter, making it easy to follow and understand.
task achievement
Your letter effectively addresses all parts of the prompt with a clear and engaging recount of your museum visit.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite