Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Adam I am writing to express my feelings. I have a meeting with my colleague. I am terribly sorry, I will not go to the

cinema

. Please accept my apologies.

Firstly

, You know I am the senior manager of my corporation.

Due to

this

, I have to change my plan.

Therefore

, I need to prepare for the meeting.

This

person

is my colleague in the corporation and

this

person

works as a boss named Sean. Sean invited me to the

cinema

. After the

cinema

, we are going to discuss some issues. I would like to visit with you to the

cinema

but I will not go. I will offer a human who can go to a movie house. You know, the

person

used to be our classmate. If I am not mistaken, it has been two weeks since our classmate came from abroad. If you can not remember the name of the

person

. I will tell you he is named

John

is a suitable partner to see the film. I promise not to do so again and humbly request your forgiveness. I hope that they accept my suggestions.

John

is good and he worked as a film specialist. I guess you are never bored with

John

's period of film watching. Yours faithfully Mr Amirbek

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coherence cohesion

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task achievement

Try maintaining consistency in your explanations and reasons.

coherence cohesion

You've successfully structured the letter with a greeting, body, and closing, which is excellent.

task achievement

You completed the task by providing all the required information in a well-structured format.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

216 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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