The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map compares the design of the village of Rye Mouth from 1995 to the present.
It is noticeable that the
houses
in the north and south areas expanded some buildings. Furthermore
, Nowadays, the forest park is removed in the east area
.
In 1995, in the north area
, there were 12 houses
and farmland which was replaced by golf in the present and the forest park was replaced by two tennis areas. Moreover
, the amount of residential rose to 16 houses
. In addition
, the road extends from east to west which adds two houses
.
In the southern area
, shops had been changed by restaurants and fish markets rebuilt by apartments which means the number of buildings dropped from 6 to 4 buildings. Then
, besides
hotel has built a car park in the east area
. Furthermore
, in the sea, fishing ports have been removed in the present. Furthermore
, cafes in the ocean still operate nowadays.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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