The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure of two charts demonstrates the material status of the population of
Canada
and Australia and the population was described as the percentage. In the first chart, the status
divided
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into 6 sections in
Canada
and
Australia's
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had 5 types of sectors.
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, separated but not divorced people were the highest proportion in
Canada
and the lowest was
divorced
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the divorced
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rate enclosed by 1%. In Australia,
married
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field
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peaked
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46%, compared to the others and
as well as
Canada
, amount of divorced individuals
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low point which registered
2
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per cent. In the time of
Canada
, never married and widowed components had no difference with 7 per cent.
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marriage and married parts were 3 percent and 29 percent respectively .The following circle graph
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that separated sections were placed
the
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second enormous portion within
total
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the total
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dimensions.
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, single and widowed which were incorporated by 5% and 6%.
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